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Dark Poetry #4

You never knew

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-09-09 12:27 PM

You never knew what it was like to be normal,
Until you were different.

You never knew what it felt like to be happy,
Until you were swallowed with sadness.

You never knew the warmth of acception,
Until you felt the sting of rejection.

You never knew the comfort of people,
Until you felt the bitterness of being lonely.

You never knew that she was there,
Until she was gone.

*yeah, just a random little poem, i found scrawled in one of my school books.*

"Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath"-Kurt Cobain

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2004-09-20 01:45 AM

It sounds cool. It kinda leaves you hanging, sorta, but that could add to the poem in an abstract kinda way. I liked it though.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-09-20 04:38 AM

i like!

gud little flow going on there

some of the best poems are found scribbled in ur school books!

LOR

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-09-21 03:08 AM

It made me feel empty, I want to cry. It just....was painful, in such a good way. I loved it.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

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