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vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-09-08 12:37 PM

I see you looking over here.
But your eyes gaze right through me
One of the crowd to you
A blank staring face
Blocking the view of someone greater.

How I long to be that girl
Just to have your eyes linger
Instead you yield to her games
Spinning her web of deception
Teasing, flirting, smiling
It is her you want
Already caught in her lies.

She couldn't be bothered by your sorrows
Not even caring for your triumphs
She doesn't want to get attached
All she's after is a little fun
A week or two, she'll be done.

So why not me?
Can't you see I love you?
Entranced by your beauty
Enraptured by your voice
Binded by your soul
My heart pines for your affection
Is shattered by your rejection.

Why not me?
Because I am the other girl.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-09-08 02:01 AM

"Why not me?"

I made the mistake of asking this....under different circumstances. It ruined me. I love how every poem that you write has a theme I have wanted to write about but in which the words have never come. This is deep and I would say more, but the pets need feeding. Adios.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-09-08 02:47 AM

oh my kirsty u are so awesome

this was absolutely amazing. u write like everyone wants to, u write wats on my mind

Why did u come so late? we have been missing out on so much!

LOR

say wat you will, say what you mean, but you could never offend cuz your dirty words come out clean

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2004-09-09 07:56 AM

i to know the pain of being the other girl... nice write on this painful subject
nicely written..
keep it up...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2004-09-09 05:35 PM

Welcome to the dark Kirsty . . . you are going to love it here . . .

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-09-09 06:45 PM

Wow Kristy...amazing poem.

Welcome to Passions...like littlewing said, you are going to love it here.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

brezee
Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

6 posted 2004-09-09 10:12 PM

*sigh*...I've asked this before, but oddly enough, it seems like after a while the feeling changes and comes back and changes and...well...you catch my drift...but yea...I hope things work out for ya...great job and WELCOME! WOT! WOT!

~*brezee*~

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

7 posted 2004-09-10 04:23 PM

hey thanks for all your comments guys. like i've said before, i'm so glad to finally be on here. i've been trying for months, but it always said no new registrations...but i got lucky, and it let me on FINALLY, its so cool.

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