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The perfect night (no reason to hide)
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The perfect night (no reason to hide) |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
Sitting on a stump Shaped like a chair I feel the breeze pick up It's flowing through my hair Looking at the light pole How bright it is... Petting R.J., my cat Oh, those eyes of his Boring as it may seem There's thought going on Looking through the window, Everyone is gone... I sit here and ask What's to do with his life? He talks about the bad He asks for a knife... How on a night like this could anything be wrong? I guess some people are weak But someone's gotta be strong I guess I'll accept it The responsibility So he has someone to talk to... Someone as strong as me 'Yea, that's it' I'm thinking to myself 'He can't hide anymore, I'm tearing down the shelf.' But now it's getting cold I should probably go inside Thank you for teaching me To be strong And to speak out, rather than hide... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
dont know what to say on this. interesting, very good writing. mixed emotions here |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
haha thank you. I guess i could explain a tad bit eh? lol. I was sitting outside, as the first part of the poem states, and i was thinking about my brother...I think he's going through some hard times right now and I learned, more or less, to be strong from it and try to help him and get him to talk. I figure one of us, if not both, may grow stronger ya know...so...that's pretty much it lol. thanx again...  ~*brezee*~ |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
This was sooooo aweosme... I CANNOT beleive only one person, besides yourself, has posted a reply on this poem! This was just so damn awsome.... I am saving... Amazing... Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
umm....thank you very much...I'm glad you liked it...I've been writing a lot a lot because my finger split open and I can't play guitar so....haha the next best thing and I figured why not write something that was actually happening...hopefully i can get around to posting more and especially replying, lately i've just been reading and not replying, hoping that I will think of something to say later on lol...BOY! big run on sentence there haha...I'm done... ~*brezee*~ |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
definitely a very very good poem, nice work..keep it up. Kirst. "Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath"-Kurt Cobain |
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