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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
Relentless darkness Lure me into its hollow core I huddle close My knocking knees comfort my cold, cold heart Bleeding knuckles Torn wrists Tatoos of a lonely nigh Hating myself Hating how useless I am Shaking fingers Race up and down my forearm Dancing with my skin Burn my shallow grave Cut my puppet-strings Let me fall into my own story My own life Let me decide how to end it Cus I'm sick of wanting it to end soon I need a new motive *note: please note that this is nothing to do suicide.* nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I really liked it. I don't know what else to say. Liking it doesn't give it the glory it deserve, and neither does loving it. Arrrghh that hallucination thing is happening again. I nearly cried when I read it this morning, because, I guess I need a new motive too. Sigh. Can't think of any more encouraging, glorifying things to say...So I'll go now, oh my hollow one today. Hollow. "If I could change anything, Then I would change everything, these bitter days, shall remain." - Bitter. Ninedays. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey witch: naw . . . this just has to do with a major change of scenery, nice writing |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
(L) so amazing soph (L) not much else to say See u on friday! LOR say wat you will, say what you mean, but you could never offend cuz your dirty words come out clean |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Hey, such awesome writing. i love everything about the way you write, the way you put the words down...they just seem to fall into such a perfect order...its so..awesome lol. kirst. "Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath"-Kurt Cobain |
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