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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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0 posted 2004-09-06 05:21 PM



Have you ever held
'tween tips of finger,
the bud of a rose?

Still so pure,
nestled in comfort.
So precious in this
panacea.

It is such a sweet sorrow
to see it in full bloom and alive . . .


© Copyright 2004 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2004-09-06 06:11 PM


Yep, sad to think it is soon to whither...

But while it blooms, it blooms!


littlewing
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2 posted 2004-09-06 08:36 PM


Where are you, Mr. Sneaky?
Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-09-07 01:44 AM


I like how your poems that I have read, are all beautiful.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2004-09-08 07:55 PM


Thank you so much guys . . .
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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5 posted 2004-09-10 05:14 AM


Sad...whistful...but it has beauty too..
Thank you...

Goldenrose.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

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