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News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY

0 posted 2004-09-05 10:30 AM


Stick & trick me
Yeah, give it your best
Totally unaware
You're failing my test
You think you can use
And I'm blind to see
But in the end, it'll be my grin
For with you I will not be

Stick & trick me... while you can

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-09-05 02:47 PM


Using people is pretty ignorant.  Your poem is pretty cool.  Its like saying, "use me while you can, because later one of us may dissappear."  Its all about attitude. lol.
-GIS

Everything is beautiful in it's own time

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

2 posted 2004-09-05 08:08 PM


I like the irony you try to express here.

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
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EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
3 posted 2004-09-30 01:30 AM


how did i miss this? yeah! stick and trick me while you can.
with swords of steel rage
reverse psychology
kewl!

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
4 posted 2004-09-30 02:03 AM


When you know the intentions of the stupidly...weak; those sticks and tricks can never hurt me. It is quite sinister to know you are being played, and just watch it happen. Interesting. Dug it!

Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself...

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