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DarkDreamer
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since 2004-09-04
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nowhere,special

0 posted 2004-09-04 11:49 PM



the power kives in our own insanity,
and when we find our peace of mind,
the monster awaits to take it all away.
the wind that blows in your clustered brain,
will linger on for you.

just counteract the pepper
and maybe fall in love with life
or ride on death's faithful back.
Eat! Eat! Awaken!

But the real story arose from the grave
like the iron man in our own quick save.
just try your best to escape the monster
and saved shall you be.

that was a bedtime story that my dad used to tell me. a story about a little boy that fell in love with life and his name was pepper, but he died and arose from the grave and rode on death's back. everone hated him, so he killed them. all he had to do was eat somethng and he could awakedn and turn into the wind in front f your house. one day he escaped the monster and was saved for an eternity...

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DarkDreamer
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since 2004-09-04
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nowhere,special
1 posted 2004-09-04 11:51 PM


oops. typo. "the power lives in our own insanity"**
News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY
2 posted 2004-09-05 10:35 AM


And may that wind we are to become buff a few people about to remind us how peppered we once were. Neat! Thanx for sharing!

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

3 posted 2004-09-05 08:29 PM


Nice personification of death.

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
My Creations

vampiana
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
4 posted 2004-09-09 01:16 AM


cool.

"Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath"-Kurt Cobain

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