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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Human heart after all Post tear quiet awe Hurt and bleak impurity Healed with place of glassy kind My life artistic, What have I to work at it Vibe ons I hold on, sometimes spill An honorable drag on Golden Rule Annoint, hello, and feel it kill Pride to strip and do kill Freedom truth of he from me Intersection dirt small moth puppets Peek through a tiny window In big trouble scene Soapy seen and grave gray missed Cleansed from me that crave was hissed Departured life it smells so sweet Hungry screams swollen shut Speed of worry work a bit, and Shut a claim this call legit Everything is beautiful in it's own time |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
amazing write. Honestly, i'm being honest. lol Seriously though, i really loved this. You are such an amazing writer. The ending was the bomb, and the use of metaphors and similes, were amazing!! I think i will add. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
WoW!!! This poem really deserves more than 2 replies!! This was just...wow...amazing...I think I'll add it to my library too.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you. I'm not sure why but lately I guess God has been doing things to my head to make it to where I can think clearer and say exactly what I have to say. Thank you for your honesty. lol. -GIS Everything is beautiful in it's own time |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
"Post tear quiet awe" Amazing and visionary work! Love this one! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you. It's nice to see what people think about my work. -GIS Everything is beautiful in it's own time |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig, I must admit, my brain is muddled because I am not cpmpletely grasping this one, but this line: Departured life, it smells so sweet is deliciously evil. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
This one is called "Light" as an ironic reference to where its being posted and its basically talking about beating the devil at the gmaes he plays in my head. And not only just for me but for several other people too. To give some other people the freedom in him he so longs for them to have. God is so awesome. -Craig He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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