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Innocence was spilt

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 01-18-2008 01:27 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I think its quiet now, darkness in his eyes

Leave me alone now, she screams as she starts to cry

Farther away, hidden alone they go

The blood that was shed, noone would know

Finger prints ona knife, blood on a wall

Innocence that was spilled, that made her fall

We see the evidence, what happens when its over

but we could never inmagine, the real truth, before

What her life was like, could have been so much more

but why would a human being do something like this

To rape, to kill and have nothing missed

As if theres no heart, no reason at all

Just enjoyed the pain, watching her fall

What will we do, to stop it from happening again?

because it could be you, family, or a friend

A life has been taken, far away

and you cry inside, because they won't be here for tomorrow, next week, or even today

Innocence was spilt a life was loss

Why can't it just be over, everything turned off

Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 01-18-2008 01:27 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem was kind of hard to write hope someone undrestands it

Kate

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2 posted 02-06-2008 08:42 AM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

i don't know if i understand it all the way nut here's my opinion..........did you lose a friend close to ur heart?


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voice2bheard
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3 posted 02-06-2008 10:34 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

No thisa poem is about a man who treated a women very badly as in rape. Its for all the women out there who have been hurt.

Kate

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4 posted 12-16-2009 04:41 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

this is the rape poem I wrote hopefully someone understands!!

Kate

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