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KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
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0 posted 2004-08-30 03:15 PM



Meat is all we’re meant to be
Cursed for all our senselessness
Rise ye drinkers of the night
Free to see yet not dawn’s light
Dread come on mortals who
In error dared gaze upon you
Free souls we who cannot see
Dream again the sun with glee
All the more bitter still
Hands we clench in eternal chill
That wanting, a vast emptiness
Meat is all we’re meant to be


We walk a path, to seldom tread
Laced with tears and paved with dead

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

© Copyright 2004 KuruShio - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2004-08-31 03:26 PM


Kuru:

I have always believed we are nothing more than cattle . . . *smile*
well done

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-08-31 07:08 PM


...very amazing...

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Laney
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since 2002-12-18
Posts 85
Illinois
3 posted 2004-08-31 09:41 PM


"hands we clench in eternal chill"  looooove it.  Sensual write in a way...I enjoyed it.  
PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
4 posted 2004-09-01 07:40 PM


Vampyric or am I hallucinating?  Because I do that from time to time.  Immortal, eternal chill, dreaming of the sun.  *ponders any and all metaphorical meanings for vampires...*
~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148

5 posted 2004-09-02 03:00 AM


I was getting a vampirey vibe too. I really like that vibe. I was really blown away by your signiture line though! What's all this about deadly bob?
KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
Posts 110

6 posted 2004-09-02 12:34 PM


yeah the vampire undertones are implanted on purpose  

ty for the replys

PS(DeadlyBob is my gameing alias, the quote was origionaly written under the name DeadlyBob thus i don't want people thinking i stole it.)

PPS (the sig refers to sufferings i had when i was younger and that i will not be avenged till the apocalypse/armageddon, its actualy part of a longer poem that i may post on the site at a later date.)



Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

~K~
Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148

7 posted 2004-09-04 01:04 AM


Gaming alias ~ I am intrigued. Are these games on-line? Or role playing? Please tell me! Oh, and I really think you should post the rest of that poem because that line is killer!
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