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PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17
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The point of no return

0 posted 2004-08-28 11:31 AM


Have you ever felt
like someone was watching you?
Thought of how you knew?
It's the instinct we're born with
that tells us when to run,
that screams that something is strangely, deeply,
Wrong.
But wires got crossed,
the On switch is stuck,
and that instinct runs rampant over logic.

© Copyright 2004 Chaos - All Rights Reserved
spritrider87
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since 2003-05-31
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NH
1 posted 2004-08-28 12:37 PM


how true this is. i have found though that if you turn the whole system off you tend to be oblivious. not good when there is really trouble but it dose calm you down queit efectively.

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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nowhere special
2 posted 2004-08-28 02:23 PM


o wow...i like this a lot. It is so true. I have read a lot of ur poems, and athough i may not have posted on all of them, they were really good, just like this one. You are a very talented writer.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-08-29 03:46 AM


a writer like you comes along very rarely. i loved it. you can write down what is on everyones minds, and how simple it may or may not be. Just for that reason your poems are amazing.

and because they are so real

absolutely amazing.

wow

"When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..."

PainBaneChaos
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The point of no return
4 posted 2004-08-30 08:51 AM


*blins* Wow... Thanks guys.  I didn't know I was so loved.  ^_^  Of course, my poems will be coming less frequently now, seeing as how I got told to stop flooding the forum.  >.<
~K~
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5 posted 2004-09-02 02:51 AM


yep. you said it. very nice.

PainBaneChaos
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The point of no return
6 posted 2004-09-02 01:37 PM


Thank you muchly K.
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7 posted 2004-09-07 06:10 PM


very good


Hollow_Emptiness
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8 posted 2004-09-08 02:37 AM


Now there's other's who are dominating the boards. I admit, it was a bit off putting reading a a few new ones every day by you. And that's why I didn't reply to all. But I love them, nonetheless, I will never stop reading them, even if I don't reply.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2004-09-08 07:47 PM


Yes, you've captured it - well said.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
10 posted 2004-09-08 08:00 PM


Yeah, sorry about that.  This is the only vent sessions I ever get, so I tend to get a little out of hand.  I'm trying to curb that, though.
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