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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
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0 posted 2004-08-27 01:45 PM


Sometimes I wonder
why you can find somebody you care about
somebody you like spending time with
somebody you want to take care of
somebody you like to hug
hold
yet...
your mind wont let it happen
because of what others may think
because you may not give her what she wants
because you care so much you'd be afraid
afraid of hurting her and losing what you have now
because her needs seem so much different than yours
because she's ready and you're not
why?

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-08-27 03:46 PM


BJ..you have sort of answered your own why...

her needs seem so much different than yours

and probably are...

nice to read you again,
hope you are well
Maureen

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with you
2 posted 2004-08-27 10:04 PM


"because she's ready and you're not"

maybe that is why...
you can't rush into it, and you shouldn't have to...why can't you just enjoy where you are with her? If more is to come, well, then you would be ready for more, right? One step at a time....

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2004-08-28 03:13 AM


The others already said everything, but I read your signature and thought I'd point it out that it also might be your answer.
-GIS

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-08-28 11:24 AM


You express your question well.  The answer is held within, you've only to be still a moment and listen.  But sometimes, we don't want to hear what is said.  Enjoyed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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