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Defense |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Sometimes there's this detached feeling, like yu're floating somewhere near your body. When what you should do is scream and scream and cry and cry. Tear your hair out by the roots,bite your lip until it bleeds. But instead, you float away. |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
hmmm...(silent)...yea...lol, this is cool. i like how you can take something with not too many lines and make it have just as much quality and so much said...keep 'em comin'! ~*brezee*~ |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
woah "When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..." |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
i know what your saying. i do it all the time. all the time. when i feel threatened or dangerous i just float. lost and afraid i am calling out to you light angel. |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
^_^ I have a collection of poems about defense mechanisms I often employ, this is the newest in the set. Nice to see people liked it. |
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