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A Place for you... |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
I've found you a place Of firey red Housing some others And souls, possibly Dead The place fills up everyday So hurry while you can Don't forget the water Or maybe just a fan This place burns for you So there's no going back If you want to take a ride It's always red, no black. I understand if you don't Remember it's always here And no matter where you are It'll always be near. Wait, something just happened A flame just went out It's for some unknown reason But for you I feel doubt Maybe it's for the best Although there's no ease This red place in my heart, for you (*sigh*) Has no more vacancies... This is sorta odd how it just stops the first part and switches but...it's sorta like my other poem, 'that's all there is to it' ... |
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Manth88 Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 45IL, USA |
Hey Bre, Simply Amazed, Beautiful Poetry, Keep It Up!! !^*Manth88*^! |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
*Blinks* Wow. Beautiful. I like it muchly, although I can't seem to pinpoint exactly why. |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
haha, well thanx for reading it though lol. i dont know what to think of it either really lol, thanx again, you too sam...  ~*brezee*~ |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I haven't been concentrating today, I've tired to read other poems here today, but couldn't find any....thing that made me want to finish. Glad I read yours, top to bottom. Great read. Recommended for insomnia. It wakes you up. Hollow. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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