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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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you eye me like prey waiting to pounce at any false movement i make but im careful you touch me like a child making sure to hold me so i don't run away from you but im quick you hold me like a knife held tightly in your grip so i dont fall and break something but im sharp you love me like an unwanted toy always there for you when you absolutely need it, but ignored otherwise but im getting sick of it you speak to me like im stupid making sure i can understand every single vile breath that leaves your lips but im not listening you need me like a strand of hair not really needed at all just there to look at but im no photograph I Refuse To Be Used By You And The Only Thing That Keeps Me Smiling Is Reciprocity... "When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..." |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
wow!, This is awesome, I love how you used all the metaphors, and related yourself as not being like them, haha i hope that makes sense, i think you know what i mean though. This was great! nice job  ~*brezee*~ |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Don't know what to say. It's hard, because I always want to compliment you but the words I use are always the same. Loved it though. Hollow. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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