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Dark Poetry #4
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peaceful_dreamer
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since 2003-04-25
Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW
0 posted 2004-08-22 02:02 AM

During the hours of darkness,
The day replays in my head.

Half asleep, my dreams
Are turned on by obscurity.
They drift over me.

Lost in the smoke,
Darkness engulfs me and
I can't find my way.

Apprehension washes over me.
I'm standing in a shadow
With nowhere to go.

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer
© Copyright 2004 Jennifer Pederson - All Rights Reserved
Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-08-24 04:34 AM

Loved it. Can't say really, why, it's was just...there. When I needed it.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian
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