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Rock bottom
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
All your life you hear people talk about hitting bottom. This is what it's like... Somewhere inside a small, painful thud. It won't rattle your teeth, or make your head spin, or break any bones. But you'll feel it, and it's somehow more real than anything you've ever known. Like your soul taking one last, final fall. It even sounds dramatic, making your ears ring with the thought of it. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
your poems are soooo interesting to read i love them i smile at the realisticness of them (that a word? is now!) i just love your writing you make me run to you pages! and i bet these poems would make the best songs!! ROCK ON!! LOR "When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..." |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
wow....i don't really know what to say but this is awesome...i never would have thought about writing about anything close to this, but i like how you said it lol...great work!  ~*brezee*~ |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
this is so good. and its true, it simply feels like a thud, when you fall that deep. |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Thanks. I kind of like this one. Not a song, but most of my writing isn't nowadays. Glad you all liked it. ^_^ |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
this is it. what i should have written when i was talking about hitting bottom. but i did my usual thing and made it so personal it went against passions rules so it had to be taken down. but this is basicly what i was trying to say. what has happened to make you feel so much like me you can write what i am feeling. lost and afraid i am calling out to you light angel. |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Didn't you know, I have ESP! |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
i have figured it out. i could send you what i am talking about. let you see how closly you decribed what i was trying to get across. e-mail me. let me know if you want to read it. spritrider87@yahoo.com As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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