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jenifeather
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since 2000-02-21
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0 posted 2004-08-18 11:34 PM



too painful to live
too selfless to die
strive to find a middle
where life is not a lie
do not want to stay
trapt in this dispair
i am the opitamy
of "life isn't fair"
yet i keep on living
in my house of self regret
a lonely place in my mind
it's misery, my debt

if there's something you'd like to do, just let me continue to blame you.
-pearl jam


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PainBaneChaos
Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
1 posted 2004-08-18 11:38 PM


*Edits*
too painful to live
too selfless to die
strive to find a middle
where life is not a lie
do not want to stay
trapped in this dispair
i am the epitome
of "life isn't fair"
yet i keep on living
in my house of regret
a lonely place in my mind
it's misery, my debt.

Misery loves company, and you've got lots of it.  I'm sure most of us have a poem like this tucked away in a notebook somewhere.  My point being, cheer up, you're not so alone as you might think.   And there are two reliable men in this world that always help me feel better.  Ben and Jerry! *ice cream, for those who don't know, and the best there is at that*  I highly recommend chunky monkey myself.  But, I'll stop babbling.  Feel better.

jenifeather
Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31
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2 posted 2004-08-18 11:41 PM


thanks my spelling stinks.

if there's something you'd like to do, just let me continue to blame you.
-pearl jam


Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
3 posted 2004-08-20 09:02 PM


you're right. life isn't fair. never will be.
it's how we deal that is important.
i enjoyed this, and i empathize.

We are all luminous beings, not merely crude creatures of matter.
- Yoda

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