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PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return

0 posted 2004-08-16 04:16 PM


Idle ramblings.It's that kind of day.

Demons court my every move,
twirling tales under full moons.
Whisking me away on whims,
manacles on heavy limbs.
Bracelets turn to shackles
hiding my moments of poison.
Stars glare down with accusations
too horrid to define.
The wind howls out its irritation
at my unholy, unbidden intrusion.
I shiver at the darkness
pressing in on me like knives.
Howling in the distance,
things around me bringing flies.
I bring my knees up to my chest,
as well as chains allow.
To keep my tainted flesh,
from touching putrid ground.
Blinded in the night,
starting with every sound.


[This message has been edited by PainBaneChaos (08-18-2004 10:42 PM).]

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brezee
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since 2003-06-02
Posts 140

1 posted 2004-08-23 04:04 PM


WOW! I can't believe no one has replied to this yet! haha now I can see where your vivid thoughts could make you have nightmares! although it may be ramblings for ya, I think it's really neat....it's like (mwahaha!) graveyard-ish. I likes! you should keep rambling and posting lol. nice job!


~*brezee*~

Manth88
Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 45
IL, USA
2 posted 2004-08-23 04:10 PM



Hey,

Nice write, hope to see more!!

!^*Manth88*^!

PainBaneChaos
Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
3 posted 2004-08-23 06:28 PM


Yet again, Thanks you muchly.  I feel so loved when people reply, and for a while I thought this one would go unnoticed.  Thank you both!
spritrider87
Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294
NH
4 posted 2004-08-27 11:41 AM


Wow+awsome+speechlees=???? whatever it equals is what i feel this was so good. and you have gotten into my head once again. your good.

lost and afraid i am calling out to you light angel.

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