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PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return

0 posted 2004-08-16 02:17 PM


You can't take my life
it's all that I've got.
Broken and tattered,
rittled with rot.
I know you won't want it,
I don't think you could.
The twisted iron I live with
would tear apart anything good.
But still you try,
You're my biting shadow.
Everywhere I go,
Everything I do,
Everyone I know,
You have to know them too.
Get your own life,
on your own time.
I'll leave you to yours.
You leave me to mine.


Little bit of venting.Forgive me if it doesn't sit well.

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EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2004-08-16 02:31 PM


i know people like this.. some people just latch on.. why do they do this?
PainBaneChaos
Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
2 posted 2004-08-16 02:54 PM


I don't know but when you figure it out could you tell me so I can pound it out of them?
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