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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2004-08-14 06:10 PM



I lay on the pillow soft
with life standing at my side.
I drift and list
and feel so bliss,
mellowed as I glide.
Come take me now
I see I'm bound.
For majestic now I've found.
The years weren't missed
or lost though kissed.
My journey for a crown.
Don't cry for me
we'll meet again,
you'll know that sending sound.
When death comes then
and at the end,
no time will be around.
You'll see it then
life sends us when.
All moments same and now.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2004-08-16 02:33 PM


yes..

you know.. in a way.. you could say this isnt really "Dark" poetry.. i guess it all depends on how you think about death..

enjoyed your work

cheers

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2004-08-16 05:52 PM


Thank you Eagle, for such a nice comment. Thank you VERY much for reading. The best.

poe

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2004-08-20 05:13 PM


" lay on the pillow soft
with life standing at my side.:


what a wonderful line..

hey, couldent quite find you on that othersite

lwt me know

Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2004-08-20 06:59 PM


Hey eor, Thanks!! go to Salty Dreams Poetry Forums @www.ezboard.com , then go to the darkside forum. I'm WSDenio.
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