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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148
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Time makes a fool of me on a regular basis Who am I pretending to sucker this is how I suffer This mass hysteria years come in dimminishing sequences with a frightening clarity I carve my skin into a new reality |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I carve my skin into a new reality..... Wow. Hollow. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Short lines, but nice. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
awesome poem and in asnwer to ur reply on my poem called "I Am" yes, i do know wat that means. really liked this one. love all your peotry though. loveandempathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
this is really good. i dont know how to explain what i ennded up feeling from this. keep writing your really good. "I am the bringer of darkness. A shadow in the dark. I prey on the. The child of the lost souls. I hunger for the love of one unknown. The one to reve |
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