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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-08-03 01:48 AM



No one knows how this blanket grips me at night
how the pillow wraps around my head
No ones there when i cry at night
holding me so tight i cant breathe
No one see's my reflection in the mirror
how the scowl on my face grows
No one wants to hold my hand
squeezing it when i need reassurance
No one understands me when i'm cold
how the wind seeps right through my skin
No one laughs with me in the night
while i laugh at my pitiful life
No one even cares
how this darkness tightens like a noose everyday
No one even says anything
when they see this hate surround me like hungry wolves

They dont even look as i waste away into a corner where i cant be seen.
Into a corner where no one goes.

"It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pee in his/her pants - Brandon

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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-08-03 01:57 AM


So honest...and a completely pefect way to describe...a lot of things. But lovie, I'm here, and always have been.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148

2 posted 2004-08-03 08:01 AM


I like how raw this is. How vulnerable you have made yourself. I would also like to see the flip side. (There must be something keeping the wolves at bay.)  
darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
3 posted 2004-08-04 03:58 AM


been there
done that

gd poem tho

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
4 posted 2004-08-04 09:08 PM


I have been there also...

Very amazing poem though. I have missed being here.
You have always been an amazing poet.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
5 posted 2004-08-05 12:10 PM


This is good.
I used to feel this often.
Then I realized that the only way to become cured, was to do it myself. understanding yourself, is so much better than being understood.

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since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215
Michigan
6 posted 2004-08-08 11:42 PM


They dont even look as i waste away into a corner where i cant be seen.
Into a corner where no one goes.


,,,,,

now i know lol
just kiddin , lotta power in your words
-wolf

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
7 posted 2004-08-17 04:41 AM


there's more people in that corner than you think.

We are all luminous beings, not merely crude creatures of matter.
- Yoda

PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
8 posted 2004-08-17 01:52 PM


I wholly agree.  That corner has to be quite the rowded spot by now.  I like the poem, though I can't think of anything no one hasn't said already.
Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
9 posted 2004-08-18 05:00 AM


I do know. I know everything, but what can I do? I feel useless, in my life and in others, i'm pissed off at myself. But I don't know if anything I can say helps.

Anyway,
Love always,
Courts.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

jenifeather
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 31
Here
10 posted 2004-08-18 11:45 PM


we all know our own blanket, cries, reflection. it's too bad that it never feels like anyone else knows them. wonderful poem.

if there's something you'd like to do, just let me continue to blame you.
-pearl jam


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