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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-08-02 09:57 PM


I stood upon
precipice
and leapt
feet first
into hell
which welcomed me
with brimstone lips
fire laced tongue
damnation's kiss
and I burn
for the want of you

s.a.t.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-08-03 02:03 AM


Not sure if it's the first I've read of yours, but you can be sure as hell (pun?) I'm going to search your name now. Short...but amazing.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148

2 posted 2004-08-03 02:15 AM


Hi Susan. Very nice write! I really enjoyed it.
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-08-04 09:23 PM


Thanks, I appreciate your feedback.  Sometimes we leap the leap of the damned, but it can be such bliss . . .

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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