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alibaster
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0 posted 2005-11-15 11:28 AM



Her candy-flavored lips parted.
Her tongue played with the words.
Her orbs of soft brown danced.

Laying
secret
trap.

Tenderly
she
spoke.

I was caught.
Tangled in her soul,
like moth to flame.

A-Alibster Tuesday, November 15, 2005

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

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1 posted 2005-11-15 06:12 PM


Very much enjoyed this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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2 posted 2005-11-16 08:43 AM


Ali~
Very nicely done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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alibaster
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3 posted 2005-11-16 01:56 PM


Thank you both very much for your kind words...glad that you enjoyed.
Until...alibaster (ali) {the Queen of Darkness}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

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