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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
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0 posted 2004-07-31 11:01 PM


A hole in my heart,
Where love passes through,
No light at the end,
And no material left to patch it up,
This hole,
Big enough for an eye to look through,
And see everything I lied about,
Bleeding to death,
From the glass shards you pulled out,
No time to survive,
Moving too fast,
Through life,
The hole, resembling the moon I once gazed up at,
And wished to visit,
Press your eye against my heart,
And see everything I kept a secret from myself,
Tell me what I mean,
The continuous stabbing of the wound,
Is breaking my heart.

No more dreams of moons,
Just satire of my thoughts and memories.  

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

© Copyright 2004 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148

1 posted 2004-08-01 05:10 AM


breaking hearts
is the one thing
that never fails you
you learn a new song
or you just get
sucked under

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
2 posted 2004-08-01 10:30 AM


~K~ gave a perfect response..so i echo him

and i add how much i feel this...

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-08-03 02:55 PM


I too feel this --

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
4 posted 2004-08-04 01:13 AM


sigh

amazing as usual

ur writing is so................ i dunno the word for it........... i geuss majestic wod fit but it wasnt wat i was lookin for. anyway this poem is great
wat else can i say?

loveandampathy

darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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