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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2004-07-28 11:57 PM



Fleshy orb,
and the worm who knew.
Tunnels, dragged, browning
with reminders.
To dine, leaving the smooth,
shinny outer casing alive and unknowing.
Never feeding on the seeds, within.
Not to be out-witted by self - selfishness,
brought on by which it exists.

The worm in the orb
will surface.
With only vacant thoughts, for us
to fill.
Like a cosmic prescription
the worm will then know.
Which seeds will stay, and
which will go.

  


If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (07-29-2004 08:46 AM).]

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Lexy
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1 posted 2004-08-06 03:12 PM


not sure why this has no responses...
people were probably puzzled by it.
I thought it very descriptive.
"Like a cosmic prescription"
I loved that line.
SO...great.

Xeonox
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2 posted 2004-08-07 02:26 AM


It is a puzzled poem. I like the ending though.
eor
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3 posted 2004-08-09 03:42 AM


hey poe, its been a while, nice to see some of youre work in here...

a little different than what i am used to seeing form you but i like it...it speaks of soemthing outside of the realm of conventional thought...


i dig
nice write my man

Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs

mysticpoe
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4 posted 2004-08-10 10:33 AM


Hey Lexy, thanks for the boost with this one. It is a bit off the usual. You must be in-tuned.

Xeonox, Thanks for stopping by and taking in a read. Think of the worm as the evil in life and the orb as the Earth. Hope this helps a bit. Thanks again.

eor. good to here from you man, I'll send you an e-mail with re: to the site I have been hanging around. Check it out. Later man.

Thanks to you all again, poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
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blues & greys
5 posted 2004-08-11 03:15 PM


hey poe, send my that site again it did not come through
mysticpoe
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6 posted 2004-08-11 04:35 PM


Hey eor, here you go, www.saltydreamspoetryforum@ezboard.com/

I'm listed as ws. See you there.

mysticpoe
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7 posted 2004-08-11 04:40 PM


eor, place "salty dreams" in find.
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