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PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-07-26 04:44 PM


I feel I’m adrift
And stand not upon solid ground
I’m sinking fast
How long can I hold
Onto the dead memories that passed
From my life without a sound
One hand clutching Earth,
And one reaches for Heaven
With one hope to breathe
The air of innocence
And a chance to see
Through naked eyes again
I can’t live like this
With a knowledge of truth
I can be so believing
And given to gentle persuasion
Time can be so deceiving,
In the passing of youth
I feel I am melting
With each passing day
Nothing matters anymore
To me; nothing, no one
Will be the same as before
Set adrift on an endless sea,
Finding our way


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yv
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 574

1 posted 2004-07-26 05:32 PM


That was so amazingly deep.  I know the pain of being in a world that torments you.  Beautiful.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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