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muted
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0 posted 2005-11-14 11:58 AM



Sacrificed wishes;
shards of stars
strewn across midnight,
these whores
of scattered notions
that begged the light
to shine

"Just for me"

and be damned
when the sky falls.

© Copyright 2005 Dawn van Krieken-Smith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-11-14 12:13 PM


Sometimes, even stars won't shine bright enough to clarify those dark thought nights.




MovesInSilence
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2 posted 2005-11-15 01:29 AM


love the way you write, glad to see you have written more.
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3 posted 2005-11-15 11:30 AM


Lovely...
Until...Alibaster {The Queen of Darkness}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

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4 posted 2005-11-16 02:05 AM


thanks you guys
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5 posted 2005-11-17 05:54 PM


where have you been my friend~~ missed reading your words...

hope you  and yours are well


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6 posted 2005-11-19 05:52 AM


so nice to see you M! thank you for being here!
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7 posted 2005-11-25 02:32 PM


dang dawn what a thud this made when i read it , i like you when your dark lol
hope all is well sweet muted , i miss your writes ...peace ~wolfy

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8 posted 2005-12-05 07:47 AM


so nice to see you too wolfy!! been a long time, and yes...all is sweet thank you for being here and reading
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