My life(Part 1) and many more to come...

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Dark Poetry #4

My life(Part 1) and many more to come...

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2004-07-23 05:34 PM

We aint got a lot of cash,
To buy couple of benz,
But we got a smile,
That’s worth the same,

We was born deprived,
As I grew up through years,
I learn how to smile,
Kept dreamin all the while

We fought amongst-
Momma tried to teach us
All we had was one other,
But I never gave it much care,

This place was drivin me crazy,
Seein young girls with babies,
I had a plan to get out,
To make it to the right door,

I stayed awake a nite dreamin,
Tellin who was there to listen,
About my hopes and my plans,
They tell me it just me wishin,

All week I kept working,
While my peers havin fun,
I was keeping my dreams alive,
Through this rhymes I survived,

Dinner was on the stove,
When I made it home at ten,
Hungry I been for a while,
I could barely fight it,

My momma made no miracles,
But she made dinner every nite,
For that I was thankful to her,
I never went to bed a hungry child.

Fear is what kills me tonight.

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

1 posted 2004-08-04 06:14 AM

I read parts 1 & 2 and I think you got the hook. I'm looking forward to reading more of you.

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