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Looking at your picture |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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I look at your picture I see your lighted eyes I smile and touch your cheek wishing back the clock Could we have been? Could we have worked? The answers are irrelevant as the wind takes them away with the dust But still i have your picture and still i see your eyes and even as i touch your cheek the time stills as you aren't here Would you have held me close? Those nights i could have cried? Even though you never would have dried them, my tears still leaked for you But still i have your picture and still i see your eyes and even when i touch your cheek I know we never were Would you hold my hand? Would you even try? 'Cause in your eyes i always knew i wasn't what you were looking for But still i have your picture and still i see you eyes and even as i touch your cheek i still wish you were mine *note: since i know certain people will ask about who this poem was written for...not pointing fingers...it was written last year and i just recently found it again. LOR "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pee in his/her pants - Brandon |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
wow its wicked to read sumthin old and see how ur writings changed. this one you can tell is so much more basic then ur awesum stuff these days. itd good but not as good as u can do. maybe you shud try and improve it cus u got all the right elements for a wicked poem here. dnt think u hav to, just an idea loveandempathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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