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kissa~rachelle
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0 posted 2004-07-20 07:43 PM


I havent posted in a while.
I hope you like it.


It was a year this last september,
since i saw your baby face.
I'll be surprised if you remember,
the hell you put me through everyday.

You were my first love,
I really dont know why.
When i think of everything you did,
its all i can do not to cry.

People say you've changed now,
but it's hard to comprehend.
Is all the hurt you put me through,
coming to an end?

You think that i hate you,
and that hardly comes close.
Some people think i love you,
but no one truly knows.

For now, i think its better,
if my feelings stay with me.
One day maybe I'll tell you,
but for now it's just a mystery,


even to me.

Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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1 posted 2004-08-19 01:18 PM


did you ever solve this mystery?
spritrider87
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since 2003-05-31
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2 posted 2004-08-19 02:00 PM


i hope everything goes well until you figure this out. just dont let it rule you. because it never helps.

lost and afraid i am calling out to you light angel.

brezee
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since 2003-06-02
Posts 140

3 posted 2004-08-19 09:57 PM


i liked this one, i can totally relate to it. And although it's easier said than done, i try not to think about it. Hopefully you'll find the chance to say how you feel and not feel like taking it back at any time, nice write.

~*brezee*~

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