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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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The past year of my life has been very trivial...I was in a relationship with a guy who struggled with many substance abuse problems...I know this poem is fairly structureless,but I haven't written in ages and this one just poured out of me..... Dark eyes, white powder. Lost love wilted flower. Damaged soul whimpers in the night Lost in chaos, no end in sight. Addictions fed, breaking hearts. Ever after, never starts. Lost hope, shattered dreams. Clouded memories, silenced screams. Beautiful confusion, could never let go. Inner conflict, too hard to hold Burning desire, empty mind. Southern soul mate left behind. Influential struggle, lost fight. Naive lovers, powerless tonight. Colourful illusions, ultimate sin. Strike three, dark side wins. Attempt escape, quiet cries. Unconscious battle, hands are tied. Blackened hearts, empty void. Disrupted perfection, lives destroyed *for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time* |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
VERY NICE. and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Beautiful confusion, could never let go. Inner conflict, too hard to hold Burning desire, empty mind. Southern soul mate left behind. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I loved this poem. I know what its like. Losing someone, over an addiction. I've been on both sides... Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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