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0 posted 2004-07-17 01:45 AM



I can ‘t find love in this place,  
My thoughts and my dreams are misplaced,
My dreams turn colder and colder,
Through these years I became older,

I want to shed tears tonight,
But the man in me picks to hide,
When no hope is left in sight,
My arms reach to cover my eyes,

Hurt is what I believe tonight,
Anger has taken my life,
I walk on a straight edge,
Keeping this rage in check,

Can somebody guarantee me hope?
Or love untouched,
A trust so sure,
That I would die for it ever more,

My pain and my fury,
Left me feeling drained,
How do I live on?
When my nightmares have won?

Struggle is what I face,
I see that I am a miss fit case,
As I write down these verse,
I leave my heart in a hearse,

Change my heart to cold,
And make my choices bold,
This sensation got me going mad,
No doubt, I always feel bad,

I seek knowledge and wisdom,
When people trick me,
Why do I stand there and look dumb?

My wounds are eternal,
No remedy comes to mind,
Only these words give me some relief,
Help me loosen up my beef.


© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
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1 posted 2004-07-17 09:30 AM


the rhymes are forced, but dont worry i do it too.......alot, but it's a good read, great work, keep it up

"Trina"

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