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Not A Better Place...
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Not A Better Place... |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
There you go Thinking things will be better But, with the way you're starting You should begin writing the letter Saying you're sorry And you knew it all along For what you thought would turn out right Is actually turning out wrong. I wish it didn't happen this way Truly I wish it did not But, I'll still always love you Though I'm the one you forgot I wish you could see How good you could make it But there's always temptation And the need to fake it Although I love you I never want to see you again Because it always makes me wonder How could you be my friend? So, go ahead Move away I know you'll remember What I said that day... It hurts me to tell you That's not the right thing to do Because I know deep inside There'd be no me without you... I hope you live to see the day I can say "thank you" to your face Until then watch what you do Don't end up in the wrong place... |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
this is very straight forward, I like that. its simple, sounds like more of a venting piece. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
How i wish i wrote this....great work! I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
thank you guys for your comments... lexy- honestly most of my writes do come from venting either in a good or bad way...thank you for your reply... ~*brezee*~ s1nfully 1nn0c3nt- thank you for your reply...i think that's the best compliment i've ever gotten...thank you... ~*brezee*~ |
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