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PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-07-15 01:23 PM


Nothingness, sweet Nothingness,
Come wash over me
Coarse through tired veins
To once again bleed

Nothing lasts forever
But everything has an end
Even if twice removed from it
Can’t escape this downward trend

I feel angry; I feel happy
As I blister, burn, and peel
I feel every opposing emotion
If only I could just not feel

It’s a most impossible desire
To want the warmth of Nothing
Oh how nice in the dark
And the sweet comfort it brings

To freeze all the senses
And lie in Nothing’s embrace
To take no more chances,
And hide in the shadow of my face

Give me a place with no more words
No more feelings, and no more hurt


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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-07-21 08:12 PM


I hear ya.
There have been many times
i have felt like that. Too
many i think. It's scary.
Wishing to not feel anymore.
almost to be free. Yes. I definitely
have been there. Amazing write!

kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

spritrider87
Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294
NH
2 posted 2004-07-23 10:26 AM


nothingness... i've felt it once before. but it left me behind wishing it would come back. nothing i do seems to matter any more. except to get back that sweet nothingness.  

"alone yet unafraid to hurt. i go through every day trying to find my way. where is the light. where is my fight. is this how it ends?"

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