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PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return

0 posted 2004-07-14 12:17 PM



Scarlet love
Caress’ my arms.

I am spellbound
By its charms.

A warmth that won’t
soon go away,

Then I’ll bleed
another day.

People stop
And stare, and stare.

They just don’t seem
To be aware

That this is my life
You see.

It’s all that really
Makes me, me.

I’m dangerous,
They draw away.

They simply don’t
Know what to say.

And so, I sit
And alone I cry.

The one place I
Don’t live a lie.

Where my dreams become
My reality.

Where I talk to myself,
And I agree.

Where “freak” and “psycho”
Remain unsaid

As I stare at the wall,
From my little bed.

I shake
And hum a little tune.

My pitiful attempt
To dispel the gloom.

And darkness crowds,
And again I weep.

My private lullaby
Lulls me to sleep.

And I dream of crimson
And of charms.

And warm lover’s caress
Upon my arms.

“Wake up!” they scream.
“Get out of bed!”

I can’t get rid
Of the voice in my head.


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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-07-18 12:57 PM


another brilliant poem

you are an amazing writer

please write more

LOR

"It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pee in his/her pants - Brandon

PainBaneChaos
Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return
2 posted 2004-07-18 11:46 PM


Awww.  Thank you muchly.  Most of the writing I do ends up in songs for the band I'm in.  I'm glad you like it.
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