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Anti-Gravity |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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It was in your eyes i fell Fell and hit hard lost track of time and wandered off into some outer space You captured my gaze with a single glimpse with those electric eyes and that merciful grin Around me i saw black my outer space with only you there was no light save for the magnetic rays you were sending out You were my sun shining down over me giving me energy to breathe and give myself to you Floating aimlessly around each other you kept me from floating away in the blissful anit-gravity It was in you arms that i felt the best i ever felt and up in my outer space your eyes kept me alive *note: not somethin i've written before i feel. Something different? NOt sure wat this one will get back... comments? LOR "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pe is his/her pants - Brandon B |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I liked it. It was a little bit different, maybe because it wasn't as dark? Maybe because it was sweet...instead of sour. I did like it though, anti-gravity, I wish I could imagine that feeling. Thanks, Hollow. Courts. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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