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buckysimone
Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27


0 posted 2004-07-11 03:56 PM



within a time
the world wouldn’t allow

the decisions hiding beneath
baggage of lies
i’ve lied

i knew something was on my side, stopped at the drop of a hat.

until they turned their minds onto me.

to speak the voice

the soft supple hand
decisions beneath the surface
which way will i go?

garbage through your words
un-tampered minds
why are you?

i’m moving away
are you being honest?
to you

it was a feeling
unknown from the family

problems

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Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2004-07-11 06:01 PM


this just confused me, it was over the place...?

"baggage of lies
i’ve lied":repeative

buckysimone
Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27

2 posted 2004-07-11 10:13 PM


It's not just about one person...oh well for you
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