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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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Life used to be so easy So carefree and ... and so easy I used to love everything around me ignore things i didnt just let the days bleed deep into my memory. But now the light that once led me through those easy days has darkened i am now alone as i sit waiting for something to happen i feel like there is no purpose for me anymore i go to school, wave and smile at my friends forget everything as i have what i think is fun but then i remember the easy carefree days and know this new fun is a mask over what i used to be I thought i loved the new me Thought everything about what i was doing was right but as i see the faces of my previous life tears seep into my eyes i think of all the things i used to do, used to be i want all those things back, but know the possibility is the lowest ever impossible do i ask for too much? isnt what everyone wants impossible? no matter how much they want it? Or not. Maybe you do get what you really want, if you really want it that much Even though what i want back, i've never wanted anything more before, i still know its impossible because what i want so much, i already had now its impossible to get it back "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pe is his/her pants - Brandon B |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
butiful sounded more like a story, which made it real personal. i know how you feel. but you cant rly keep thinkin like dat cus u cnt hav it bak how it was. thnx for ur replies to mine. darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
When I first read it, I saw regret, but it's not really regret is it? It's a sort of grieving, a longing. I sort of agree with Sophie, it's no use looking back, look to the future, but remembering and reminiscing is half the fun. I could use this to describe me as well, and so I've saved it to look at at a later date. It was story-like but made what you're feeling so open and exposed, it was easy on sore eyes. Good write. Courtney xxx "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
yer i duno aye i accept it and everything but just kinda sad and i needed to get that out you could say i was over exaggerating?  yer watever LOR "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pe is his/her pants - Brandon B |
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