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0 posted 2004-07-07 11:53 PM



Today, I had a choice,
To save a life,
I decided not to,
Stand up and fight,

A child became orphan,
And a bastard,
Both at the same time,

How did I ever commit
Such a crime?

Inside I wept,
Many tears amiss,
Forgive me lord,
For I shall forget never,
This day in my lifetime
Which will haunt me forever.

© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Kellie_Cantrell
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1 posted 2004-07-08 02:46 AM


This is so perfectly penned. I feel the anger punching right from the words.
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