Now im going to kill you..like only a best friend could

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Dark Poetry #4

Now im going to kill you..like only a best friend could

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-07-04 03:32 PM

the cutlass of friendship went
right in the heart
life is like getting stabbed
in the back and watching it bleed
every acton you make, every word you speak
is part of your misery tree
that grows out of the soul
and is chopped down to be fed
to the fire in your eyes
tears roll down my face
acid burns holes through
my flesh
this wound is bone deep
but the pain is not fresh
your so stubborn
pride is a sickness
get well soon
i love you i hate you
your my life, your my doom
now we're back to the start
will this mindless fighting stop
or will you enver let go?
the past has happened
too late, oh well
get over this bridge
before i drown you
in your own shallow shell

You better count your lucky stars that everything I wish for..doesnt come true

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

1 posted 2004-07-06 02:08 AM

Wow - This is really great. I loved it.

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

Theory
Junior Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 23
N. CA. USA

2 posted 2004-07-09 10:10 AM

"pride is a sickness
get well soon
i love you i hate you
your my life, your my doom"

awesome write! really enjoyed thanks

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

3 posted 2004-07-09 01:34 PM

Sad and beautiful write I must say, very good imagery to help the reader feel how you do. I know this feeling all too well. Keep your head up girl.

{{HugZ}}

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

4 posted 2004-08-11 03:31 PM

wow this is awesome. i love the way it flowed

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2004-08-11 03:42 PM

nice write, encapuslating angst nicley

Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

6 posted 2004-08-12 01:47 AM

love all of ur poems, but this one is extra good.
awesome

loveandempathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

7 posted 2004-08-13 12:05 PM

Whoa, nice, intrigueing title, by the way.

Hollow.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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