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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-07-03 08:49 PM


The crevasses forming before me,
The waterfalls overflowing,
Cascading down pale mountains,
Only to reach the bottom,
And be dismissed, as a raindrop,
Falling from the sky, blue as ever,
Never to be known individually,
Or understood.
Never having a purpose,
Falling from heaven,
It was a long road here,
With many stops so you could,
Wait until the waves of nausea dissolved,
Passing from hunger to stillness,
But you are here,
And I am happy.

Even though your tears are for the sacrifice you made,
To join me in this beauteous hell,
Where it was not so beauteous,
Until you arrived,
And the clouds passed to reveal sunlight,
The light at the end of the tunnel.

For me it was you,
And for you I can only hope it was me.

(Author's Note: The title of this poem is thanks to the CD, Distance to Here, by Live.)

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

© Copyright 2004 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
peaceful_dreamer
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since 2003-04-25
Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW
1 posted 2004-07-06 02:15 AM


so very beautiful

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
2 posted 2004-07-06 09:55 PM


I loved this poem. I mean, it was amazing!

~J.Lynn

There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without.

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
3 posted 2004-07-07 12:30 PM


wooo

scarily good.

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
4 posted 2004-07-12 02:05 AM


Thanks guys, I appreciate it.

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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