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Softly Killing Me
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Softly Killing Me |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Skin against skin, Eyes on each other, The only way to speak without words, The touch of a smooth elegant hand, Against a large warm one, The dulcet breath of lips against lips, Blade against bone. [Sorry I haven't been on in a long time, but I'm back!] "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
nice poem. I liked it very very much. |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
Blade against bone, good line. Enjoyed! http://www.nexopia.com/profile.php?uid=34810 <--all me baby! |
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Paper Tiger Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 77 |
This is really good. Here's another title suggestion: Considerately Killing Me We see much, observe little, and perceive less. |
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