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SwEeTnSeXy18
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0 posted 2004-06-29 12:11 PM



"Sadness"

My heart bleeds again
The wretching sobs rock my body once again
I cry out but,am not heard, as I sit here my heart beating loud enough for everyone to hear for sure
I feel as though I'm dead my body lifeless, my troubled head
As I lay here and think of you I know I should have knew and the sadness washes over me, the sadness brought by you
Thoughts of you which once were sweet make me feel sick with defeat
I feel all alone by heart's grown cold
And I tell myself I should have known
I must keep the tears inside, of course those I have to hide
Is it a sin to love you
I wish I knew may be then I could get over you
At times I feel crazy
Because, of the pain
And this reminds me all over how much I love you again
I try to keep sane but, at times the pain's so unbearable I just lye there so caught up in my pain
May be I brought the pain which kills my heart again and again

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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1 posted 2004-07-01 06:35 PM


very intense poem.  i enjoyed it.

~Alli~

SwEeTnSeXy18
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2 posted 2004-07-01 10:47 PM


Thanks for reading it Alli.

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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