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Tania
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0 posted 2004-06-28 04:10 AM


I hate the way you breathe
I hate the way you eat
I hate you in a way
I wish I could beat
You like an egg
So there is nothing
At all left
I hate you in so many ways
I wish you instant death.



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1 posted 2004-06-28 12:49 PM


Instead of taking on a negative feeling about a person, or situation it is so much easier to confront them and discuss the problem instead of letting it be yours.  If they still don't get it, "let it go," so it is their stuff, and not yours?  One person is a grump not two  

This shows that there are two ways to look at a problem and yours got me thinking about the way I look at it.  I hope it is just a poem and not how you feel, as life is just too short to harbour negativity.

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