are my dark poems that bad?

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junemac
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since 2003-04-24

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uk

0 posted 2004-06-12 11:59 AM

wrote this after getting no replies here lol.

I weave the darkness
of depression and fears
Of wickedness and sickness
and the down-trodden years

My muse spews forth all evil
Vampire dances & sick dreams
Are my words wasted? feeble?
no ? just paranioa it seems.

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

1 posted 2004-06-12 12:01 PM

apologies above spelling
x hugs june x

jenifeather
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since 2000-02-21

Posts 31
Here

2 posted 2004-06-12 07:48 PM

don't feel bad no one replies to my poetry either. the poem was very good

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

3 posted 2004-06-13 12:00 PM

Hi, Liked the poem.. vampire dances& sick dreams indeed

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

4 posted 2004-06-13 04:07 AM

Thank you Jeni & The Jackal,
I appreciate your time and comments. I enjoy giving and recieving critique and hope to post many more poems here.
Hugs June x

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2004-06-13 04:09 AM

Thank you, Jeni and the Jackal,
I enjoy posting poems and giving and recieving critique. I appreciate your comments and hope to post lots more here.
Hugs from June x

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2004-06-13 10:50 AM

I personaly don't reply to a poem, if a descent reply doesnt pop to my head, I don't like to go with a silly "good work", or "nice write" and leave it at that, also, alot of people don't go for the poems that rhyme,,,,,,anyway,,,just my thoughts,,,I liked this post,,,,Im an old fan of vampires,,,,lol

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

7 posted 2004-06-13 11:42 AM

Thanks Michelle, I agree with that by the way. I tend to reply to poems I personally like and enjoy.

June x

Paper Tiger
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since 2003-09-28

Posts 77

8 posted 2004-06-13 06:34 PM

My poems go unnoticed as well, so don't take it to the heart or anything. I think you have to have 1000 posts to gain respect around here.

We see much, observe little, and perceive less.

KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

9 posted 2004-06-14 03:29 AM

don't expect a huge ammount of replies for a poem on dark, they rarely get above five or six, really a view counter would be more accurate. I don't think people know what to write down as a reply for most peices.

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