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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world

0 posted 2004-06-10 11:10 AM



Clouds plastered over playful agony
somewhere deep within me
scream echoes barely heard,
cover silences violence
beyond myself...
even confusion blotted out
floating on the surface of delusion

my face -
a story of myself
my life's waste.
stars bearing fruit of passion
buried far behind my eyes
looking beyond simple creation
every battle ends and dies

my face -
history of armored agony
a price of haste
chaos ruined in sympathy
a punishment fought to taste
harbored skulls in my window
tears crack through some dusty place
obstacles recall shreds and follow

my face -
sold of honest obsession
empty hard case
sweet mercy and grace
lacking wings of possession
tattered yellow lace
lost in time of direction

my face
my face

clouded over plastered agony
heart faint beats within
scream let go
barely heard
over...
silence.


Running out of pain

© Copyright 2004 Bonnie Sue Bixler - All Rights Reserved
junemac
Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
1 posted 2004-06-11 03:02 AM


I like this. Good structure and pace. Extraoridnary work here. well done.


my face -
sold of honest obsession
empty hard case
sweet mercy and grace
lacking wings of possession
tattered yellow lace
lost in time of direction

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