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Dark Poetry #4

Slow Dance Of Death

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2004-06-08 05:34 PM

She lusts after his hot blood
swinging her warm hips to tempt
Swaying provocatively for him
Eyes are darker than hell coals
Mesmerizing him with her dance
She calculates each teasing step
wefting her invisible web
and he is blinded to her evil
caught in the trapping's of illusion

She spies the weakness as he succumbs
Her skin burns with greed for him
for his blood-spill on her breast
She nuzzles closer, with breathe tease
He melts, masculine feed of the she-devil
Her eyes meet his and freeze-lock
as her crimson lips touch his briefly
before the bite

He feels the sting as she tears his flesh
opening his eyes, he recognises the beast
and the writing of death upon her smile
She drinks passionately the dark juice
He is one more easy kill,
Quenched and exultant
Feasted and sated
Triumphant princess of hell.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2004-06-13 12:35 PM

Do you read romance novels?...I don't but for some reason this sounds like you could find this in...like, a Goth romance or something...cool read, I like it a lot better than your other write =).

- River

Running out of pain

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

2 posted 2004-06-13 04:17 AM

Thank you so much for reading and responding to this poem River. No I never read romance. I tend to read Thomas Harris, Patricia Cornwall, Stephen King etc.
I enjoy the vampire idea though lol.
Thanks again
Hugs from June x

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2004-06-15 05:19 AM

i love this june..... this is amazing...
i love the use of imagery and your useage of basic human behaviour.....
the vampire theme is an excelent choice and i love it....
keep up the writing and i hope to read more of yours soon

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

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