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SwEeTnSeXy18
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0 posted 2004-06-04 11:44 PM



"I'm tired of hiding"

I'm tired of hiding how I feel
And now that I've broke your heart I don't know when to go or stop
I've done a bad thing and slowley but surley it's killing me
I feel like I could die but instead all I can do is cry
Why did this have to happen I mean your a great guy
I wish this was untrue my friend for my heart feels broken and I don't know what to do...without you
I am little and unsure of myself
Save me from this hell
I need you in my life...my little piece of paradise
I'm a lucky girl to have what I have and what I've had but to lose you makes me more than simply sad
I feel dead but my heart still beats and I only wish this was a very bad dream
I want to scream but cannot show how I feel
But it's getting harder to lie so I will just sit and write this while I cry
I will miss you barley covers it my friend but for now I will try and pretend

© Copyright 2004 Lisa Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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1 posted 2004-06-05 01:36 AM


Wow... I really like this one. Amazing. I could feel every single drop of emotion that you put into it. And thats sumthin'. I am sorry... if this really happened. I have gone through it far too many times also. Which is sad. BEst of luck...
Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

SwEeTnSeXy18
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2 posted 2004-07-01 10:59 PM


Kissa: Yeah this did happen. Thanks for your sympathy! Take Care!

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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